(They arrive home. The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. "I can't even find anything funny to say because I'm that mad with both of you," Luan said, her parents becoming uncomfortable with the glare on the young comedian's face. I MESSED UP!!! But dont worry, youre still a great writer. And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. ", (Lynn starts running towards him. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. (tears up.). She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. The Loud House: The Loud Luck (Rewrite) - DeviantArt Taking the device out of the girl's hand. it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. Let's go! What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? ", Lincoln: "Thanks. * Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Start talking. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt You just mess up everything! You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. Suite and Sour / Back in Black. Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! I feel like a fool! Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. We wont! (facepalms. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. We are no longer grounded to the room. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). You tricked us in the first place. ", (and that did it. Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. Except for Lynn). Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Lucy: Come on Fangs, we've got some repaying to do for Lincoln. Lori said. [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". Literature. ", Lincoln: "No. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." In. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. My first story is done. You try dancing in this heat! Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. Lola: Hey, Lincoln . Ruth shouted back, insulted. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. How can I help you?" Lincoln: You know what!? Anything bad happen then? Hope you enjoy. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" (They keep searching the house. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I ADMIT IT!!! No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! He managed to, but with a twist. (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending Add to Favourites By HaileyKittydoesart Published: Mar 31, 2021 Favourites Comment 4K Views "I'm not bad luck!" Lincoln said in a megaphone, he was done with sleeping outside and eating acorns to survive. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I was being selfish!. Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". tears began to fall out their eyes. We know you are!". Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. "SAVE IT, RITA!" ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. Loud House - FierceSquid276 - Wattpad ", Lincoln: (to Lola) "Lola, all those pageants I went to, did anything bad happen those times? Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. Ruth said, curious to where this was going. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. She hugged him back.] Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. The Loud House No Such Luck FanficThe Loud House: No Such Luck Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? Luan: Maybe these silly superstitions werent such a good idea. I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. Don't fight now! (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. Tell the community what's on your mind. It was against the law. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! Well just grin and bear it. No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! There's no need to shout. "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. My team needs that! So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. I was stupid to believe in luck and to rely on it. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. All rights belong to Nickelodeon. Here's another Alternate Ending. Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. The End. See if I care! Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." Lola added, shouting. The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! (Family begins to come around. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Lincoln: (crying berserker tears) NO!!! Especially Lynn. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" I do not own the Loud . Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. Sam: Luna, I got your letter. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. Give it back! Lisa: (sighs) Obviously one that needs our cerebrums and mental spirits adjusted. Get me arrested. "Which room number is it?" (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. We were given the room." "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." Rita asked. I'm not bad luck. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. Keep on writing fics like this! @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. It's my first ever one shot I've done. Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. "you bad luck, Lincoln!" Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? Everyone finally realized that what they've done. Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. "Same here." Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. Sweaty Pants here! Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. Any bad luck? This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. ", Luna: "No, you were right. I hate concerts! (Raises his fist at her). We don't know what we were thinking! Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). *, Lincoln: It's not fair. And Lori and Lisa. You are about as braindead as you're heartless! After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. Goodbye for now. What kind of parents would do that? (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! So we've been in here trying to pass the time. So expect a bill in the mail." But seriously, we made a mess of everything! Theres no need to shout. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? Leni: Linky, dont shout. She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. Reacting to The Loud House (Fanfic) - TV Tropes (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! No such luck alt ending5. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! The furniture was all over the place, the shower was ruined, the air conditioner was gone and he noticed a 17-year old girl with blonde hair in a blue shirt outside, about to jump from the side of the balcony. Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. All of you!" He's just really mad, isn't he? Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! As they were trying to relax, stomping and shaking were heard, causing everyone in the spa to wonder what was going on. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. Thats not how it works! And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Whats next? That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Even Ronnie Anne was there too. Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. Lincoln: Stop it! nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. Cuts back to now. "Lynn? Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Luck. Luna: I dont know. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are).